Unknown origins Chapters

Prologue

Looks mysterious.

It is :D

Action begins in the next comic.
After a mysterious event happened in the forest a shadowy figure had stolen away there grey haired guardian. Korrin springs into to action following the trails of this winged beast and is unknowingly transported into the Twightlight world. A world filled with monsters, violence and where the very air is toxic to humans.

This looks great!

I cant tell what's going on.

In The first 4 skits, the protagonists fighting. In the 5th and 6th, he falls into a portal, and in the lasts skits, he's in an unknown place. Right?

In the first one there's a blur, in the second there seems to be a dead body. In the third and fourth two characters are fighting and one of them resizes for some unknown reason. In the sixth and seventh yep, looks like portal travel, but I'm not sure if the portal was his attack, his opponents attack or just a random occurance.
In the seventh, the opponent is still there...Doesn't seem to be doing anything, and there's some dark being saying someone wont escape, not uite sure he's on about the main character or someone else. In the last three, there's another world, probably wouldn't have figured it out if Luc hadn't already typed out that it was. There's some other guy in the other world that at first seems to care about the heros life and warns him, then seems to be the one wanting to kill him.


...I'm really confused as to what going on.

You see I could explain what just happened but i don't wanna ruin it :3 If I can clear 1 thing up without spoiling anything it's not the grey haired man who is attacking, it's the dark type figure with the hood on. Because that is the twighlight world which is home to the many different dark, magestic creatures and beings just like the dark hooded man, he is able to sink into the shadows and come and go between that world as he pleases. When Korrin went inside of that portal the hooded man followed him and is now attacking him. There is a reason for him wearing the hood other then to just look good.

Edit: Btw the yellow air is called twighlight, it is toxic to humans and causes then to slowly bleed. Even a hero can't survive in there, those 2 havn't been in there for very long and those soldiers on the ground being struck by some force coming from the sky are having souls enter there body to attack the main character.

I guess you've got a whole backstory to it, but really I'm still confused. I guess everything will be cleared up as the comic goes on.

Yea i already have the whole story figured out.